Hola! I've just finished the final draft of my novel, which has taken the last 14 months. I am uploading the chapters to get some decent critiques in Novel II, but i would appreciate as many opinions as possible. I will post the first three chapters for 'everyone' as these will be the ones i send out first so i want to get them as straight as possible. All and every comment is welcome, whether its on the detail of sentences, or grand themes/ plot.

Thanks and i am more than prepared to return the favour.

Juliet O'C

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