Hello all, I've been away from WW and from writing in general for quite some time now...too long...(Hello again to anyone who remembers me ) so I'm posting in the hope of getting some feedback and I hope that will then spur me on to keep it up.

This is a revised version of Vloekenville. The first version seemed to go down fairly well at first but in truth my plot was erm...weak..to say the least, and it didn't exactly meet with some of the things that are expected in a novel for younger readers. So I took on board all the great comments from here last time, aswell as being very lucky to get an enormous amount of help and inspiration from a very talented writer freind, and started the whole thing again.

If any of you have time I'd love to get any feedback and would be very grateful. Here's the link http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/17993.asp

Derek