Rio Carnival Story_Chapter 4 (Revised)

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Rio Carnival Story_Chapter 4 (Revised)
by Friday at 21:10 on 04 May 2004

Hi, I’ve uploaded Chapter 4 (Revised).

Would like comments on the flow of the chapter, is it credible?

Many thanks,
Dawn,x

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/4590.asp

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