Hi there, I've just posted a revised version of Chapter One of City of Dreams, and if anyone has the time and inclination to read it, I would be very, very grateful for any comments.

Thanks,

Adele.

Hello Adele,

I really like how you articulated your thoughts, I really admire that of people.

Adele coming to a more personal question; did you go to Effra Primary School? I think you were in my class. I remember you were good friends of Julie.

Anyways let me know, if would be fun if you were.

Adele, the spooks have found you!

Hi Manuel, thanks for your comments. No, we weren't at school together; I grew up in Leeds.

Adam, the spooks found me a long time ago...

Hasta luego,

Adele.