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jbwb short comp
by scottwil at 16:02 on 28 April 2004

I'm considering entering this short story, serendipitiously titled: 'remote' for the jbwn short story comp - in the category 3) Remote.
Actually it should be called 'Reality TV' which is probably how I'll enter it, if'n you guys don't think it's lousy. But please do comment either way.
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Re: jbwb short comp
by Account Closed at 06:38 on 29 April 2004

Hey, Sion. Was it something I said...

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Re: jbwb short comp
by scottwil at 02:19 on 30 April 2004

Yes. But in a very good way. I think you're right, there's a problem with the pace. I'm going to fiddle with and then repost. Thanks for your input as always Elspeth.
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