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Paying For The Gallery C19
by Dee at 12:41 on 18 April 2004

I need some help with this one. Not sure if the scene on the beach works...

What do you think? All comments will, as ever, be much appreciated.

Thanks

Dee.

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Re: Paying For The Gallery C19
by Sue H at 14:00 on 18 April 2004

Blimey! I go away for a week - not an internet connection in sight - and come back to chapters galore! Give us a chance!!!
Sue

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Re: Paying For The Gallery C19
by Dee at 14:12 on 18 April 2004

Sorry!

If it's any consolation I'm in the middle of reading Jack and Faye again... I think I was brain-dead for most of March... just realising how much I missed.

Dee.

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