Hello everyone,

I am new to the site and am finding my feet. I was guided here by Roger and I would be honoured for any feedback.

I have two pieces but the combined length is less than 2000 words and I would appreciate any thoughts:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/17298.asp

For the next one, here is the Write Words link but I will also give an address for a blog as, although it has the same content, the blog has pictures which may enhance the read:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/17310.asp

http://eyebrows71.blogspot.com/2006/12/how-to-faff.html

All the best

David

Great, Jeremiad
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