Just uploaded now.

As I explain in the intro, I'm not entirely happy with some parts of this but would rather not say which at the moment... don't want to plant preconceptions in your minds.

Hope you enjoy it. Do tell me to stop when you've all had enough!

Dee

Based on the excellent feedback I've had so far, I've edited this chapter today.

Many thanks, guys. That was just what I needed.

Any further comments will be much appreciated.

Dee


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Just uploaded chapter 15.

Hope you enjoy it and thanks for sticking with me. We're past the half-way point now and there's still a lot of excitement to come... you haven't seen the last of David by a long way!

Dee.
:)

More shameless plugging!

I accidentally added this into the previous comment so here I am repeating myself to get this up to the top of the page!


Just uploaded chapter 15.

Hope you enjoy it and thanks for sticking with me. We're past the half-way point now and there's still a lot of excitement to come... you haven't seen the last of David by a long way!

Dee.