I'm planning a novel set in the skydiving world. For it to stand any chance of working, the reader has to understand why the narrator is addicted to skydiving and why she keeps going back for more.

So, as an exercise and experiment, I've written a short piece describing a single skydive. What I want to know is - does this make you want to give it a try?

The Skydive

Thanks in advance to anybody who reads, if I could offer you a free skydive I would!

Sam