Let's try again.

I've uploaded Chapter 13 again because it was lost yesterday when all my work was deleted.

I would really welcome lots of comments - good or bad - from those of you who have been following this.

Nahed - thanks for commenting the first time. I think I've remembered the gist of what you said and this version has been amended in line... waddya think?

Hope everyone enjoys it.

Dee

Dee,

Just finished reading the latest chapter and I've commented on it.

I must say, and this is certainly no slur on your writing, that I found it quite confusing. I don't mean I found the piece itself confusing, it flowed very well. What I do mean is it's very unlike anything else I have read.

I guess it showed me why I don't read too many female authors. I found the style very confusing in the sense that it's centred primarily around social interactions and their implications. To be honest this is the thing that really threw me! Not sure if it's just because I'm a man or if it's something to do with my attention deficit!

Still, the whole subject of male/female styles is a fascinating one, and reading through your chapter gave me a real insight into the differences.

Anyway, good, good.

Geoff