This has been uploaded a while and I thought I just let it lie, but recently I have been drawn back to it a bit.

If anyone has time I would appreciate thoughts, feelings, criticisms whether it be right out praise to deep dark loathing on this piece.

Ta very much to all. You all deserve chips, chocolate, beer, wine and any drugs that you can get hold of.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/3824.asp

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no longer there I'm afraid. Not technical error, just deleted it for revision

Hello, was about to comment. It's long. Will send it to you on email.

All the best,
Dawn,x