Chapter 5 has just been uploaded. From now on I think I'll use this thread to introduce each chapter instead of doing a new one everytime...instead of save the trees...save the megabytes???

Dee, Jumbo and Ani your faithful commenting and following of this story is very much appreciated. Thanks muchly to you! And thanks to everyone who reads it, but chooses for whatever reason not to comment - it's all good!

Nahed

I'm not reading it because I'm faithful - I'm reading it because I'm enjoying it.

Dee
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Aww, Dee! That's a lovely thing to say. Thank you!

Nahed x

Nahed, you're just too fast for me. I haven't even read to the end of ch 1 yet.
Catch up with you soon, I hope
Elspeth

No probs Elspeth. I know it's a bugger - me uploading two chapters at once. Take your time

For those who have been following this - through my editing and adding of scenes the chapters have now been rearranged. Most noticeable difference is from the end of Chapter 2 onwards. There is a new 'scene' at the beginning of Chapter 3. And Jennifer's questioning of Emma about Oliver has been edited and moved. Also I've delayed the revelation about Dillon's widower status. So Emma still thinks he is married.

Dee, I've edited Chapter 5. Would appreciate if you could see if there's some kind of improvement (regarding writing style change).

Sorry for all the confusion!!

Nahed

okey doke...

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ps- in The Winter House I've just edited that bit of dialogue (in the pub at the end of the chapter) that you commented on. Waddya think?

Dee
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I've just uploaded Chapter 6. Emma, still unsure of Dillon's marital status, is getting jealous over him and the blonde bombshell. He throws her into the deep end at work...are her suspicions about him and Bernstein plotting against her correct?

Enjoy

Nahed x

Sorry Dee, I've just spotted this now about Winter House. Will have a look straightaway.

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Chapter 7 is up. Thanks for reading!

Nahed

Dee, I've made some changes where you suggested and added dialogue at the end of the presentation regarding questions. See what you pense.

Nahed x

Due to overwhelming demand...I've uploaded Chapter 8!

Nahed

Brill ! Will comment tomorrow when recovered from celebrating the fact that my old dog isn't dying... does Dillon have a god?

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oops... meant does Dillon have a dog.

perfickly reasonable mistake to make...

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He does have a god and a dog too! At his ranch though...yeehaa!

Ruffle your doggie's ears for me and wish him well!

N x

I've uploaded Chapter 9. I'm not thrilled with this chapter, so any comments on how to improve it would be gratefully received.

Nahed