Just uploaded chapter 12.

Hope you enjoy reading it and give me as much feedback as you can. I'm taking note of it all and it's helping enormously.

Dee

Up early this morning, boss! Is the sun shining on you?
Off to print out your Ch 12 and get the supplies in!!

jumbox

Ooh, good!

Don't encourage her!
I'm having enough trouble keeping up as it is!

Dee,
The more chapters I read your story becomes intriguing. You are hooking the reader very well, and your deep passion is shining through. Do you make it up as you go along or have you got the whole thing in your head? I make it as I go along. I don,t see the small typo's but I can see a good story here. Lewis has got to be dodgy. I think Philly should be a bit more cynical, but she's smitten. Perfect!
All the Best. Pete.

Thanks Pete,

I suppose I do make it up as I go along - in the sense that it is fiction - but I've been working on this novel for more than two years now so it is finished, apart from this final edit.

Glad you're enjoying it.

Dee