Hello, I have just uploaded Chapter 4.

In this chapter, the main character Donna explores Copacabana Beach. I would love comments on the 'setting'.

Question: Can you feel it?
Many thanks,
Dawn,x


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Plus, in your opinion, is Donna a convincing pickpocket. Ta,x

Hello, thanks for your comments on this Chapter. From them I’ve been able to focus on what’s important and bring it in line with the previous three. I’m happy now.
Cheers,
Dawn,x