I didn't see the key letting me choose what type of feedback I wanted, but feel free to say whatever you think. You can even say you think it's crap / garbage if you want to. (Even though I don't think it's great, I don't think it's garbage, but you might!) This posting is already longer than the story!

Ani

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Here's the pathway: http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/3924.asp