Having recently discovered that I am able to triple my income by way of overtime the output of my writing as been greatly reduced (if that's possible!) but I've finally managed to add another chapter and would be greatful for some keen eyed critique and nit picking.

In particular I would like to know if the dialogue spoken by the psychiatrist seems realistic and if a doctor would talk to one of his patients in such a way.

Cheers

Geoff

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How I Feel

Cheers