Hello, everyone. I've just joined the site. I've just started taking my writing seriously after doing it on and off for years. This site was recommended to me by a current member. He wants to stay anonymous. He's my husband! Men! But I'd appreciate any comments on the first chapter of the novel I'm working on at the moment. Hope to hear from some of you soon. Thanks.

Lynn

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Sorry. He's just reminded me to post a link.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/16563.asp

I'm not too good with all this technical stuff.

Thanks to everyone who commented. I've now taken the piece down to do some more work on it.

Lynn