I have just uploaded Chapter Three of the mystery novel I am currently revising. It answers questions raised in Chapters One and Two and points to future conflict. All comments appreciated.
Many thanks,
Dawn,x

Hello there,
Thanks for reading and commenting on Chapter Three, I have taken on board your suggestions and made changes and additions. Like Persil it's new and improved. Would appreciate if you would give it another read and let me know your feelings.
Many thanks,
Dawn,x