Chapter 5 is up now.

I hope I'm not posting these too quickly for you... I'd hate to think you were bored with it all now.

Please be as picky as you want... I need DETAIL. I've just read it through on here myself and already spotted something I'll have to change. Isn't it weird how a different format highlights things you've missed on the seven hundred previous times you've read the piece...

Dee

Just done some more amending including a teeny scene in the bank... waddya think?

Dee

Just uploaded Chapter 6.

Hope you enjoy it and please keep the comments coming if you can. They're a tremendous help.

Cheers

Dee

Shameless plug 99.

By way of an experiment, I’ve just added chapter 7 to the end of 6. Is this too much in one go? I never know. Sometimes it can be a bit off-putting but in this case the two chapters are clearly marked so no need to read it all at one sitting.

Please let me know if it’s too long and I won’t do it again

If this thing works… here’s a link.


http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/3715.asp


Dee.

Hang on, girl. Hang on! Just been away for a few days and half the book's up! Give us a chance!
Sue