Hi Suzy
I agree with Manusha's comments - and other coments too. You may want to join a group like Intensive Critique. It doesn't matter if the group is not historical fiction, as may of the groups encompass many genres.
Noting your interest in historical fiction, you may be interested in a forthcoming conference (with agent pitches, etc) which looks really good: www.hns-conference.org.uk
I love being a member of WriteWords. I've got so much from it - and hopefully given to others too. It's give and take, you get what you put into it.
Good luck. I hope you find it as valuable as I have.