jeez uncertain how to use this site, but I'm sure I will figure it out soon enough. Just put up a piece work to kick start my journey here .... called 'Forbidden Fruit' still unsure which section it belongs ... feel free to read and comment ...

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http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/26553.asp

Hi, Trea and welcome to WriteWords

As a trial member you can join one Group and upload one piece of work - you'll find a list of the Groups here:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/

If you need any help navigating the site just give us a shout.


- NaomiM

Hi Trea, welcome to WriteWords.
I've had a look at the piece you've uploaded, I thought it was quite good, perhaps, as Naomi as commented, you might join one of the poetry groups and hopefully get the feedback you deserve.
Anyway, good luck with it.
Cheers,
Jim.