At the moment I am just pondering whether to sign up as a proper member. If I dedicate myself to writing this book I would use this site as a valuable tool but at the moment I am considering if this idea has any mileage in it or not. I'm not really interested in writing anything else, so it all depends if this idea is good enough.

So I would very much like the opinion, good or bad, of anyone who has the time to look at what I have uploaded so far. You can find my work in the archives at http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/22794.asp

The work is the memoirs of a fictitious character called Jacob Cox (You will notice in my upload he is called Jacob Siplet but the surname has now been changed). Well actually it is semi-fictional, semi autobiographical. The characters and events in my imaginary diary are caricatures of myself, my family, my friends and my own history.

I’ll look forward to your comments

Best regards

Scott.

I know the piece uploaded seems quite long so please do not feel you have to read it all. I am mainly interested in how you feel towards the characters and how you feel about the way that it is written. Thank you.