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The Spring Freeze

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 18 May 2005
Word Count: 71
Summary: To be taken with a pinch of sugar....
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The Spring Freeze

the sun is cool today
light runs me through
ice grass burned white
sunday flowers dazed,

we curl in our bakery
undercover cooking
our bagel flesh softly
twisting in the glaze,

our dough loops touch
the sugar swimming out
soaking in coca darkness
we gingerly dunk and drip,

outside the noon frost bites
on the glass stemmed roses,
the morning's perma-hunger
sated by our hot comfort.


John G.Hall(C)2005






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joanie at 17:47 on 18 May 2005  Report this post
Hi John. I enjoyed this. It is bitter cold here (for May!). This is beautifully sensual. I can feel the contrast of temperatures!

Lovely.

joanie

Account Closed at 09:05 on 20 May 2005  Report this post
Like Joanie, I love the contrast and sensuous feel of this one! Very visual and also you can almost smell those scenes ...

Scrumptious!

:))

LoL

A
xxx


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