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Haiku -"Highland Loch"

by Kay 

Posted: 10 May 2005
Word Count: 11
Summary: Hope this does not disappear this time !

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Gulls swoop high above
the backdrop of great mountains,
fathomless water.

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paul53 [for I am he] at 12:47 on 10 May 2005  Report this post
Fine piece, like seeing a small painting in a gallery.

jewelsx at 16:28 on 10 May 2005  Report this post

I particularly liked the last line - great image

Nik Perring at 17:25 on 10 May 2005  Report this post
What a lovely image.

lieslj at 20:47 on 11 May 2005  Report this post
Powerful and succinct, Kay.


joanie at 18:05 on 12 May 2005  Report this post
Loved it the first time around!

Beanie Baby at 20:30 on 13 May 2005  Report this post
Hello, Kay.
Having just recently returned from the Grampian Mountains after a few days at my future home (I hope) - Braemar - this really brought it all back. It creates beautiful images exactly like those I came home with. Excellent.

Kay at 11:26 on 15 May 2005  Report this post
Thanks everyone for encouraging comments.How lovely to be moving to Braemar ,Beanie ,hope everything works out.

Account Closed at 09:07 on 20 May 2005  Report this post
Really enjoyed this one - a great, dramatic sweep conveyed in such tightly written lines - wonderful!!




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