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Orwell’s “1984” Redux–

by seanfarragher 

Posted: 25 April 2005
Word Count: 387
Summary: "Grant that we may be one flock and one shepherd!" POPE BENEDICT XVI -- 24 April 2005 ------- From 1984: "He sat back. A sense of complete helplessness had descended upon him. To begin with, he did not know with any certainty that this was 1984. It must be round about that date, since he was fairly sure that his age was thirty-nine, and he believed that he had been born in 1944 or 1945; but it was never possible nowadays to pin down any date within a year or two." --George Orwell, 1984.
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Orwell’s “1984” Redux–

"Grant that we may be one flock and one shepherd!"
POPE BENEDICT XVI


April 4th, 1984.

"He sat back. A sense of complete helplessness had descended upon him. To begin with, he did not know with any certainty that this was 1984. It must be round about that date, since he was fairly sure that his age was thirty-nine, and he believed that he had been born in 1944 or 1945; but it was never possible nowadays to pin down any date within a year or two." George Orwell, 1984.



1. Antithesis

Welcome my children
to the end of the world.
Pray with me for the revival
of glory, murder, surprise,
chance, sex, Mozart and Ice-T.


2. Recapitulation

What glorious music the lie of unity --
Imagine the landscapes, farms,
Metropolis, graveyards and birthing huts--
all of us run in rows, hold hands;
we are delighted, simple soap opera
lovers raised without sex or tension --
no resolution likely, no plots resolve;
we fake the transitions to keep
the horizon empty, -- no mountains
meddle with unity, --if we be one flock,
one shepherd would we ever change?
Who’s the next Galileo, Luther, Voltaire?
How do we grieve when life shortens
to the least surprise, facile magic?
How do we murder the false, invite
the accidental face of "imagine?"

How do we love the color red, yellow, orange
to the exclusion of green, violet, blue –
what grand Mozart do we proclaim
when one melody replaces multiple themes, --
grunts and groans wither on the vine
with hip did e hop hop -- a forgotten blast?

Is not human renaissance worth murder,
evolution, revival, sex, love and inequity?

Should we beware the pied piper
who leads us to zero; you cannot
divide by zero. The quotient
does not exist; we have forgotten
the sunrise, ignored the hurricane.
The surprise we did not plan
will not slip from the battlement
to revised arms of mass confusion.


3. Apocalypse

At first, Morning resumed,
twisted red and black with rage
when the oceans boiled, screamed
last sound of earth; --
madness was cured.
The sheep raced to the cliff,
stumbled; no one heard
the symphony; No one published
body counts or tactical advisory.

The Shepherd was not revived.
History walks invisible without flaw.
Hello “1984.”


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laurafraser at 19:29 on 25 April 2005  Report this post
Sean this is different from your other work, (the style) but no lesspowerful, in fact I'd say it is perhaps one of the more stronger pieces I've read because it reads like a stream of consciousness, a torrent of passion, words that have catapulted themselves from your heart straight onto the page.

Artaud would have agreed with you (and so do i for what it is worth), that we need opposites to appreacite life, you need the cold to feel the heat, the loss to know the love, the bland, to know the Mozarts and Voltaires. Actually the more i read the more i like this poem, strong, true and profound, and especially haunting with the mention of orwell's prophectic 1984.

Laura.

seanfarragher at 19:42 on 25 April 2005  Report this post
Laura, it is a new poem from today and it will change perhaps more so than others.
I was so struck by the quotation of the day from the New York Times. I love the Internet for I can read so many newspapers. If only I had the time? LOL.

I wonder how many people read the Pope's homily and applauded not recognizing the neo-fascist inside the theology. No, the pope is not a bad man. He is locked into a beaten history, something that is over. Without change we would be a slighly acidic soup of amines, hydrogen, nitrogen .... no that is not early enough. Without the big bang (sex) the universe would be still on the edge of its orgasm and never would resolve.

In fact, if you re-read the poem you will notice subtle edits.

I look forward to our project. Write me if you have the time. Enlighten me with the vision of Laura. Do I demand too much? LOL.

With joy, I am Sean

laurafraser at 14:25 on 26 April 2005  Report this post
Sean with regards to your changes i have to be honest i prefer the first way that you presented this poem, the titles to me, seem almost too sarcastic and take away the initial beauty of the piece. I am thinking about the project but i am swamped at the moment and want to approach it full throttle and pour unlimited focus onto it as sexton fascinates me.

is religion really overr? the pope a bad man? no of course he is not, but i think that when you attach yourself to an instituion your independence your singlenss is lost, you n o longer represent your own beliefs but become simply a body, a vehicle for the organisation to download theirs. the pope is in an increadibly restrictive environment, i think his ultimate message is a visage of beauty, albeit sprinkled with some unsighly pussy red spots.
Happy days,

Laura

Beanie Baby at 21:22 on 26 April 2005  Report this post
Hi Sean.
Like Laura, I think this is one of your strongest poems. I love the opening lines -

Welcome my children
to the end of the world.

It really grabs the reader and makes him/her want to go on. I also love this -

At first, Morning resumed,
twisted red and black with rage
when the oceans boiled, screamed
last sound of earth; --

This poem is full of emotion and imagery, and colours - red, yellow, orange, violet, green, blue - and they add blood and guts to a poem that has clearly come from the heart. Well done, you. Brilliant piece of work.
Beanie

seanfarragher at 23:44 on 26 April 2005  Report this post
Laura, about your second post. I think I agree about the headings. I am getting into Hesse. Shall we write now (bring them to the present) or put them both in say 1970)...... Take your time. ......

Beanie, thanks for your kind words. It is a poem outside my usual voice, but one that i threw out of my body after reading the homily of the new Pope. By the way, I was raised Roman Catholic, and fell away from the church. I became Unitarian, agnostic, atheist, agnostic, Buddhist, Unitarian. my children were raised in the open environment where they became less bigoted, sexist and racist than they might have growing up among their peers.

I am struck dumb by the failure of the Roman church to see again how the church needs reform. It may take another John Adams and John Quincy Adams to set American straight again. LOL. They were, of course, marvelous Unitarians.


Sean






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