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In Fallibility

by Zettel 

Posted: 21 April 2005
Word Count: 24
Summary: Overposting - stopping now.
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In Fallibility

He's a
white
right
stale
male
vestmented
establishmented
safe
wraith;
a Pope
of no hope
for disregarded
third world
faith.

Zettel 2005






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engldolph at 18:45 on 24 April 2005  Report this post
hi Z -

Brilliant spurt of cleverly chosen, hard-hitting, fast falling words..particularly white/right and stale/male..very good.
Faltered slightly for me in the last 3 lines in the rhythm and rhyme.
Good stuff.
Enjoyed
Mike
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