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Any Change?

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 21 April 2005
Word Count: 85
Summary: buddy can you spare a .......


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Any Change?

My look up begged for love
but he looked for distance,
fumbled, then conjured me
change, from a handkerchief
pulled from a dip of crumbs.

I whispered 'thanks mate'
& picked a pocket full of pride,
as he smiled the smile of smiles
& held his lover closer still.

A tanned vestal
cash-point professional,
her heart set
on blowing his plastic.

Then he turned his blind eye on
& head down he headed up-town
to shop till he dropped my question.

John G.Hall(C)2005.






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paul53 [for I am he] at 08:25 on 22 April 2005  Report this post
An excellent piece. Well done.

Account Closed at 19:48 on 24 April 2005  Report this post
Wonderful insight into contrasting lifestyles - lots of "street energy" in this one which I loved. I wasn't quite sure about the end line though - I'm not sure I "got" it?? Maybe I'm being obtuse ...

LoL

A
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