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Across a crowded room

by joanie 

Posted: 14 April 2005
Word Count: 31


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A snapshot
in a life
of tedium.

A taste
of heaven
in a mundane world.

Two seconds
of pleasure
bringing joy

to an otherwise
meaningless
existence.

I caught
your eye today.






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The Walrus at 21:05 on 14 April 2005  Report this post
Tantalising Joanie. Definitely captured a vivid and oh-so-worthwhile moment!

Christina

joanie at 21:08 on 14 April 2005  Report this post
Thanks, Christina. I was just about to delete it - I'm just musing, really!

Glad you responded - encouraging!

joanie

roovacrag at 07:38 on 15 April 2005  Report this post
Joan all it takes is one look across a crowded room to feel drawn into the web.

xx Alice

paul53 [for I am he] at 08:42 on 15 April 2005  Report this post
Joanie,
Stop - I'm getting wistful.
Marvellous economy of words.
Paul

joanie at 11:22 on 15 April 2005  Report this post
Alice and Paul - many thanks for reading and responding!

joanie

Flashy at 10:07 on 16 April 2005  Report this post
Yes i agree with others,love the last lines.

Good stuff

Alan

joanie at 11:30 on 16 April 2005  Report this post
Thanks Alan!

joanie

Flashy at 11:35 on 16 April 2005  Report this post
No problem Joanie.

Look forward to reading your work.


Alan

Ticonderoga at 13:37 on 16 April 2005  Report this post
You are a happy bunny at the moment; and expressing it beautifully, too!


Best,

Mike

joanie at 19:38 on 17 April 2005  Report this post
Mike, thanks for reading!

joanie


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