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Muted passion

by joanie 

Posted: 11 April 2005
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Barely perceptible
whispered breaths
across finest hairs;

kisses feathered
slowly over
aching flesh;

silent finger
traces down
a trembling back;

secret places
hidden under
tempting limbs;

tender pleasures
burning weals
of glorious pain.







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laurafraser at 19:34 on 11 April 2005  Report this post
Tenderly erotic and vivid. I love the clash of the almost sweet begining with the

"tender pleasures
burning weals
of glorious pain."

clever and seductive.

LAura
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joanie at 21:46 on 11 April 2005  Report this post
Thank you, Laura!

joanie
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paul53 [for I am he] at 11:42 on 12 April 2005  Report this post
"kisses feathered slowly" would be real nice about now.
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Ticonderoga at 15:52 on 12 April 2005  Report this post
You lucky thing!!! Beautiful. Been there............but not recently enough!


Best,
Mike
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joanie at 18:43 on 12 April 2005  Report this post
Paul and Mike - thanks! Yeah! - nice if you can get it!

joanie
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roovacrag at 13:22 on 13 April 2005  Report this post
Joan a touch of the grand passion here.
Only people who have had it know the full meaning of the word passion.

Well done.

xx Alice
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The Walrus at 21:16 on 14 April 2005  Report this post
Hot stuff Joanie!

Thoroughly enjoyable romp!

Christina
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joanie at 21:25 on 14 April 2005  Report this post
Cheers, Christina! Glad you enjoyed the romp!

joanie
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joanie at 21:46 on 14 April 2005  Report this post
Alice!! I didn't thank you! You are absolutely right - only a few know it. Precious!

Joan
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seanfarragher at 18:45 on 16 May 2005  Report this post
The poem is hot and it is a tease. That teasing may be great, but I wanted more than the risk of imagination. I wanted the fact of it (not necessarily graphic) in the body of the poem, and in its connections. I am reading poems by topic, and I love the way erotic poems can include us in the treasury of our conceits (as poetry does)......Great work.
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joanie at 21:48 on 16 May 2005  Report this post
Thank you Sean. I appreciate your response.

joanie
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