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A Disillusioned Angel.

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 18 March 2005
Word Count: 50
Summary: Game was to use the words pink,sole,tequila & leather in the poem. Have a go!
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A Disillusioned Angel

I walked out of heaven
disappointed to hell,

I shook paradisal dust
loose from my sole,

poured myself a large
double tequila sunrise,

put on my pink leather looks
and hit the bars down town,

for heaven is always best
viewed from the bottom up.



John G.Hall@2005






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Nell at 12:00 on 18 March 2005  Report this post
John, I love this - not only a whole vivid scenario but a philosophy in only fifty words! I'd love to have a go but not sure I could after reading yours.

Nell.

joanie at 13:06 on 18 March 2005  Report this post
Hi John. This is excellent in its conciseness and seeming simplicity. It made me smile at the end!

joanie

Elsie at 13:11 on 18 March 2005  Report this post
Georgeous, witty, and I particularly enjoyed the line about shaking dust from your sole, in that context. Love the end lines, too.

Tina at 13:39 on 21 March 2005  Report this post
Great stuff John
I shall allow myself to be horizontal more often!!

Enjoyed it very much
Tina


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