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by roovacrag 

Posted: 12 March 2005
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Wish I was having you smile at me
when things don't go as planned
always knew you was there
to share and understand.

Now faith in all I do
will never be the same
at least I know,that loving you
was never,ever in vain.

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paul53 [for I am he] at 10:19 on 13 March 2005  Report this post
A nice little piece, reminding us how the best in life is our interaction with others.
Is the was in "knew you was there" an intended colloquial?

joanie at 17:38 on 13 March 2005  Report this post
Hi Alice. I am convinced that NOTHING is ever in vain.

Lovely, as usual.


Brian Aird at 08:30 on 14 March 2005  Report this post
Tacit agreements bind us more powerfully than any contract to share the moments of each day with those we love. Then more than ritual, sharing becomes life itself, as if there can be nothing else, till loss disrupts and bids us learn anew.

Your piece caught it well.


roovacrag at 17:26 on 14 March 2005  Report this post
Paul many thanks.
You always know,when your soul partner goes,he is there.

roovacrag at 17:29 on 14 March 2005  Report this post
Joan nothing is in vain if you still believe.

roovacrag at 17:33 on 14 March 2005  Report this post
Brian,...As always you catch the summet and style,
You comment well and I always listen.
xxxxxxx Alice

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