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TELL ME

by roovacrag 

Posted: 03 March 2005
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Kiss me one last time
kiss me.
I know you are still warm
even though they say you're dead.

Kiss me one last time
tell me you love me
I don't believe
you're gone.

Tell me, tell me
You're still with me
we can go places
see new faces.

Tell me
tell me
please tell me
You're not dead






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joanie at 22:28 on 03 March 2005  Report this post
Hi Alice, this is heartfelt and very moving. I like the repetitions.

Joan
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roovacrag at 15:50 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
Joan.. many thanks for your comments.
Must be this time when I should have been celebrating my 40th anniversary and it being mothering sunday as well.
Might have heart attack as I'm taking all out to lunch. lol.

xxxxx Alice
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poemsgalore at 18:33 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
The repetitions really bring out the desperation the speaker feels to be told that their loved one isn't dead, excellent piece Alice.
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