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Alex Is

by Dorothy P 

Posted: 21 February 2005
Word Count: 111


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I walked into your bar, you walked into my heart.
I grew drunk only on thoughts of you
as slowly you inflamed my soul,
warmed me with little looks like kisses.
The brush of your hand burned my skin
making me want your touch over and over again.
Your vivid eyes, prouder of their secrets than the sea,
the teasing voice, that infectious laugh,
all dancing a caress in me,
unleashing an orgy of swirling passion,
locked in a frieze of pure Grecian perfection.
You make me sizzle as a woman,
yet shy and heady as a child.
You are my rainbow fantasy to treasure,
the multi-coloured bonds never to sever.






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roovacrag at 22:19 on 21 February 2005  Report this post
Ingrid.. well placed poem and a truly heartfelt one.
Loved the line
UNLEASHING AN ORGY OF SWIRLING PASSION.

gOOD ONE.
X aLICE

The Walrus at 12:25 on 22 February 2005  Report this post
Wow, what a portrait! Deep and powerful to the point of losing oneself but contrasted with an awareness of the effect this Adonis has.

A poem that really speaks.

The Walrus
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