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Loops

by goldenpath 

Posted: 21 February 2005
Word Count: 66
Summary: Nothing new under the sun


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Ever more sophisticated
The race toward the line is fated
Soft filters work to haze the edges
There is nothing new to span the bridges
When everything is said and done
It will repeat and roll again
Naivety looks tired and dated
Till youth invents the thought to rape it
Lay down my head and make me wonder
It’s new to me and that’s the answer






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roovacrag at 22:21 on 21 February 2005  Report this post
Goldenpath.
Enjoyed this. Well composed and with depth.

xx Alice

goldenpath at 23:24 on 21 February 2005  Report this post
Thanks Alice. It was written when I was a bit drunk, flowed out with the alcohol I suppose. Read 'Make Love Again'. Very strong, brave and beautiful, can do nothing but evoke many feelings.

Andy x


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