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in awe

by Ellenna 

Posted: 29 June 2003
Word Count: 25
Summary: short poem.. to indicate how quickly the passage of time can be and on seeing my son again after many years
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i see the feet
i count the toes
the bond of love
begins

i stand amazed
avert my gaze
as the man before me
grins






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olebut at 17:18 on 29 June 2003  Report this post
ellie

this is really good and you wonder where it will end when you read the first two lines

tahnk you

david
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Nell at 21:33 on 30 June 2003  Report this post
Ellie, you have a magic touch! I love this. Off to the next one.
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Sarah at 14:52 on 24 July 2003  Report this post
I can't help but picture a newborn baby, very sweet
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