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At home together - A Valentine Limerick
Posted: 27 January 2005
Word Count: 35
Summary: My attempt!
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We shall dine at the Ritz; you'll bring flowers,
but I'd rather just snuggle for hours;
for the love which we feel
beats a big slap-up meal –
Let's just stick to those amorous showers.
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 Jumbo at 15:01 on 27 January 2005
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Brilliant, joannie - and very funny!
Amorous showers! Now there's a thought.
All the best
John
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Tina at 16:06 on 27 January 2005
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I like snuggling together it is one of my favourite things so thanks for this!
AS for the showers
well ours
is leaking!
More soon??
Tina
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tinyclanger at 16:24 on 27 January 2005
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Excellent Joanie, great rhythm. Lovely witty sentiments, too, (though I have to say I think showers are only for contortionists! Am I showing me age?!)
x
tc
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Don Gorgon at 20:03 on 29 January 2005
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Lovely joanie, I do like the 'snuggling', but the 'amorous showers' do it for me, can't beat a good lather! Nice one.
Peace and Love
Don
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SamMorris at 14:04 on 30 January 2005
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Joanie,
You're right, it doesn't matter where you go, or how much you spend some of the best things are for free. Very nicely put.
Sam
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Ticonderoga at 14:31 on 12 February 2005
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Lovely, joanie - warm, tender and true. Rather jealousy inducing, too!
Best,
Mike
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 joanie at 09:06 on 14 February 2005
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Thanks Mike. Only just seen your response. Glad it 'hit the spot'!
joanie
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