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Trappings and wrappings
Posted: 29 December 2004 Word Count: 80 Summary: A few days late, I'm afraid. Perhaps I'll save it for next year!
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Whether ripped off in a violent paroxysm of delight or picked at carefully, slowly, to preserve and prolong the effect, its destruction will be absolute.
What sat so long on supermarket shelves, then in secret places, to emerge at dead of evening with its entourage of tape and ribbon and tags, will soon be annihilated.
Excitement mounts and tension rises, while beneath the Christmas tree, an absurd swarm of mayflies, resplendent in seasonal finery, will live but a few days.
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Account Closed at 15:35 on 29 December 2004
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Love the mixture of humour and sadness in this, and the comparison to mayflies is great! It left me with a nice sense of the meaninglessness of it all - if you see what I mean!!...
A minor-keyed poem and at this time of year we need more of them ...
:))
LoL
A
xxx
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joanie at 17:26 on 29 December 2004
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Thanks, Anne, for your generous comments. Much appreciated, as always.
joanie
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Tina at 08:52 on 30 December 2004
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Great images here
I 2 liked the mayflies but more the violent paroxysm of delight
Hope your New Year has much of this!
Thanks
Tina
xxx
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joanie at 09:51 on 30 December 2004
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Hi Tina. Many thanks for responding. Hope you have a good New Year too!
joanie
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Mr B. at 12:36 on 30 December 2004
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Perhaps the wrappings will have their moment of glory, as children always seem more keen to play with the boxes than the expensive presents within!
Nice!
Anthony
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Mac AM at 19:14 on 31 December 2004
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I enjoyed this poem - especially the entourage of tape and ribbons and tags
Thank you.
Mac
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Nell at 08:46 on 03 January 2005
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Hi joanie, I loved the surprise of the mayflies, and felt they were real, imagined you somewhere warm and balmy. Best wishes for 2005 to everyone!
Nell.
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fireweed at 15:03 on 03 January 2005
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joanie, I loved the way you communicated the excitement and the effort that goes into trying to make nice things last longer than they tend to. The image of mayflies is just right at the end.
Lovely poem.
Fireweed
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joanie at 16:47 on 03 January 2005
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Mac, Nell and fireweed, thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it. Happy 2005 to you all.
joanie
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