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by barkley 

Posted: 05 December 2004
Word Count: 87
Summary: A lovers thought

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A shinning moment rest in my mind
A picture of two (you and I)
Time stands silent as you kiss my cheek
Wanting forever in a single second
Contemplating the choice to leave with you
Surrender your heart, surrender yourself
Show me you and who you are
Please don't leave me, I don't want to lose
Understand my eagerness to stop you
Forgive my sadness and love my touch
See in my eyes the way that I feel
Believe in me the way I believe in you

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roovacrag at 21:26 on 06 December 2004  Report this post
Barkley welcome to ww.
Well written poem,full of emotion and feeling.
You should title it.
A lovers thought
or even
A single second.

Your poem and your title.

Readers look at the title before they read.

I always look at new writers and encourage.

Well done.


Lawrenco at 21:33 on 09 December 2004  Report this post
Very tender beautiful powerful sentiment go with it Chrisie!
Welcome to writewords.

jadeddreamer at 13:18 on 21 June 2005  Report this post
I agree a title would help to gain readers for those of us that aren't nosy. Other than that well written and I have to say it is something I can certainly reflect in. Keep it up!

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