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Balearic Day-Dreamer

by laurafraser 

Posted: 02 December 2004
Word Count: 233
Summary: 'anicca' is the Pali word for impermanence and is central to the Buddhist faith, which teaches that all phenomena, both mental and physical, are without exception impermanent. The rest of the poem is a bit of sun for dark december days... x


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Lying here on a bed in the sun,
I watch as a little boy
falls, like an exhausted cloud from the mountain-top,
floating through the air
to a place where shadows slink over sleeping villages
as pictures of antiquity dance their insomniac tale
down the cobbled streets that lead to houses dozy with slumberous siesta souls,
hidden from the wasps, bloated from their gluttonous mid-afternoon lunches shared
with tiptoeing fingers leading to terracotta plates scattered with peras y pepino,
over-flowing with pimientos a la riojana nestled like infant birds chirping to pink-purple peaches scattered with ebony-green mint.
Lying here on a bed in the sun,
I watch as the little boy drifts down to the swimming pool,
where sonorous soothing voices slip from
voluptuous bodies, curved and moulded like whipped cream from their submission to
a multitude of days bowing to Bacchus’ call.
This rubicund fellow walks past these Rubenesque Roamnesque bodies,
whose palms rest on sunset-bronzed stomachs and lazy caramel-toffee tinged legs
and whose tendrils of luminous-bleached Rapunzal-like hair flow behind IQ-uninterested heads.
Below and beyond, this stereotypical scene silent waves cover unseen sand,
Below and beyond a lone yacht drifts across bath-water ocean,
ever changing, arising and passing away
(anicca, anicca, anicca)
as particles of water&salt present themselves to their peers,
before bowing bashfully beneath them
away from the breeze that blows above
and summer-saluting to depths only the mermen know.






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joanie at 15:18 on 02 December 2004  Report this post
Hi, laura. I love the image of pink-purple beaches scattered with ebony-green mint. Beautiful.

I like the

This rubicund fellow walks past these Rubenesque Roamnesque bodies,
whose palms rest on sunset-bronzed stomachs and lazy caramel-toffee tinged legs
and whose tendrils of luminous-bleached Rapunzal-like hair flow behind IQ-uninterested heads.


I enjoyed this. Thanks for the expalanation too!

joanie

Okkervil at 19:44 on 02 December 2004  Report this post
This is marvellyous! Excellent writing all the way through! It's alternately lovely discription was disarming and then y'chucked in some snide remarks that make for a snigger. I enjoyed reading this outloud, savouring the alliteration and-

'as particles of water & salt present themselves to their peers,
before bowing bashfully beneath them
away from the breeze that blows above'

Thanks for sunny excellence!

James


roovacrag at 22:06 on 02 December 2004  Report this post
Laura a beautifully worded piece and so full of emotion.

I enjoyed reading it and will read it again,(unless I print it out,for family to read.)

You have a great way with words and should do well in the future.
I have hopes for you.

Well done
xx Alice

laurafraser at 12:15 on 04 December 2004  Report this post
Joanie, James and Alice, thank-you for reading and for all your comments-all of which were highly blissful to read!
laura x

Souchong at 15:43 on 04 December 2004  Report this post
lush piece, laura. overflowing and rich, with a layer of broken glass underneath. cool.
souchong

laurafraser at 20:25 on 04 December 2004  Report this post
souchong-what a fabulous comment! "with a layer of broken glass underneath..."-thank-you for it and thank-you for reading xlaura


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