 Elsie at 19:34 on 28 November 2004
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Joanie, cool. So true, succinct. (Don't want to make my comment longer than your piece..)
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 youngskywalker at 20:50 on 28 November 2004
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thats terrific joanie,
and there was i saving up to treat someone special,
just wish women could make up their minds,LOL,
sorry, this has turned out lots longer than the poem, whoops,
but seriously, lovely writing,
youngskywalker.
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 joanie at 21:03 on 28 November 2004
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Thank you, youngskywalker! I'm pleased you liked it.
joanie
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youngskywalker at 21:13 on 28 November 2004
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you're welcome,
i sure did enjoy it,
and it saves me the expense of flowers too,LOL
take care,
youngskywalker.
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tinyclanger at 14:48 on 29 November 2004
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Lovely Joanie. I wondered about a line break after "shoulder", but it works so well, anyhow.
Makes me ponder about the nature of love and how simple gestures, heartfelt, are always winners over the showy stereotypes...
There you go, my comment IS longer than the poem!
x
tc
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joanie at 19:48 on 29 November 2004
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tc, Liesl, poems, thank you all. I confess that I love short 'snap-shots'. I love to learn them to repeat to myself in the heat of the day!
I'm glad this one seemed to work.
joanie
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