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The Hot Dog & The Cool Cat

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 25 November 2004
Word Count: 89
Summary: an atheist stabbing thin air is.......


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The Hot Dog & The Cool Cat


Once my dog sat so close
to the roaring fire that his coat
grew red flames and gray smoke.
As he yelped he sprouted a black satanic tail
and ran screaming from his painful grooming
pet turned to devil dog, growling at hell's scent.
Now he cowers at the back of that padded room
lapping holy water from a poor man's begging pail
filled with adoration for the Cat's napping cradle
howling canine homilies to the oceans of the moon.



John G.Hall(C)2004






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Nell at 08:55 on 26 November 2004  Report this post
Hi John,

An amazing, deep and enigmatic poem with allusions that one seems almost to grasp before they slip away like spirits to the shadows. It reminded me of childhood, and that refusal to believe in a cruel and terrible God that under stressful circumstances would crumble into 'but what if...' and send me under the bedclothes whispering 'Please God...'. This be the Verse.

Nell.

laurafraser at 17:37 on 26 November 2004  Report this post
John,
a truly increadibly insightful and original piece-dark and light at the same time, grabs you straight away and leaves you in awe at the mastery you display in throwing a whole new light onto the world of the dog-brillant and i love the idea that his "satanic tail" emits "hells scent"-very clever, very unique
xlaura


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