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PERFECT LOVER

by roovacrag 

Posted: 24 November 2004
Word Count: 89
Summary: I can dream just like any woman.


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I have got the body
do you have the soul
passion like a heatwave
take part of me,or whole.

Can you stand the pace,
are you virile like a stud?
sure you got the stamina
to make love like a man should.

I want someone to stimulate
not just the body but the mind
is there such a man out there
or just the dream filled kind.

We all see in our dreams
a man thats full of mystery
Satisfaction,gratification,
sexual,functional,
A lover, who is always there on demand.






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tinyclanger at 15:03 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
"there on demand"? You sure are in dream-world, Alice! But it sounds great fun, so move up...
x
tc

roovacrag at 16:09 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Tiny I know,sex on tap.
Sounds ok to meNot sure what made me think when I wrote it.

Love should be fun,
like love in the sun.

Many thanks.

xx Alice

TeeFoley at 16:49 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
The perfect dream. Beautifully written.

Well done!

Tee Foley xx

poemsgalore at 18:23 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Hot stuff Alice, hope you find him.

roovacrag at 19:23 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
TEE every womans dream. We can only wish.
xx Alice

roovacrag at 19:25 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Kathleen can only meet him in a dream.
Must be why I have early night and get up early.
Quickie..hehehe

xx Alice

Elsie at 21:48 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Alice - yeah there is - mine's snoring on the sofa right now ; )

roovacrag at 21:58 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Elsie..don't knock it.
Better to have one snoring than none at all.
I remember my hubby snoring, now its the bloody dog.

xx Alice

Brian Aird at 19:59 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
Sex is mental; so stimulate mind not just body works well.

Only stamina required to make it last? That's the art of sex, perhaps. Constant re-invention; same instrument, different tunes.

A lover who's 'full of mystery'? That's the danger of stranger!

'just the dream filled kind' - apart from repeating 'dream' in the poem - remember if you don't have a dream, how can you have a dream come true?

Brian



Don Gorgon at 20:29 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
I like this roovacrag, for me, the first couple of verses have an 'authoritative', 'demanding' tone to them and the last two verses outline what exactly your 'demands' are, with the last line encapsulating the lot in eight words! Lovely work roovacrag.

Thanks

Don

The Walrus at 20:48 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
You gotta make up your mind babe, I mean 'take part of me, or whole.' or 'I want someone to stimulate/ not just the body but the mind'? We all want it all, but when you can't get all, you gotta take what you can get non? Otherwise, it's just wistfully waiting while Life just ticks on by. Err, right, I'm rambling, but my final thought is that this piece is cheering loudly for the sex and that is no bad thing.

Red
xxx



roovacrag at 21:36 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
Brian.
I agree, stimulate the mind and the body stimulates yours.
Perfection.

xx Alice

roovacrag at 21:40 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
Don.
We all look for the perfect lover,just only seems to happen in dreams.
Glad you liked the first two stanza.

xx Alice

roovacrag at 21:43 on 25 November 2004  Report this post
Red
I know you would like me to go out there and find another man.
Not sure I would get one to fill my desires lol;-)).

Thanks babes.

xx Red mum


Zettel at 13:07 on 27 November 2004  Report this post
AliceJ

Frank, honest and direct. As ever, beautifully expressed.

I liked it. Until the last line, which I think ruins the poem. If a man wrote that line he would be pilloried as sexist, rightly.

Respectfully

Z



<Added>

Sorry AliceJ

'Pilloried' is OTT. But I think a guy would get some stick for the line.

Regards

Z

Lawrenco at 22:56 on 28 November 2004  Report this post
Do they come in boil in the bag variety could be painful ! A good laugh.

roovacrag at 21:57 on 02 December 2004  Report this post
Zettal.. I did say dream. All women dream of a perfect man on tap,just as a man looks at a woman the same way........IT'S NATURE.

XX aLICE

roovacrag at 21:59 on 02 December 2004  Report this post
Lawrenco.......boil in the bag or better still bottle it.
Thanks for comments.

xx Alice

Zettel at 01:12 on 05 December 2004  Report this post
AliceJ

I don't.

As for nature.....hmmmn.

Z


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