 tinyclanger at 15:03 on 24 November 2004
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"there on demand"? You sure are in dream-world, Alice! But it sounds great fun, so move up...
x
tc
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roovacrag at 16:09 on 24 November 2004
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Tiny I know,sex on tap.
Sounds ok to meNot sure what made me think when I wrote it.
Love should be fun,
like love in the sun.
Many thanks.
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 19:25 on 24 November 2004
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Kathleen can only meet him in a dream.
Must be why I have early night and get up early.
Quickie..hehehe
xx Alice
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 Elsie at 21:48 on 24 November 2004
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Alice - yeah there is - mine's snoring on the sofa right now ; )
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roovacrag at 21:58 on 24 November 2004
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Elsie..don't knock it.
Better to have one snoring than none at all.
I remember my hubby snoring, now its the bloody dog.
xx Alice
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 Brian Aird at 19:59 on 25 November 2004
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Sex is mental; so stimulate mind not just body works well.
Only stamina required to make it last? That's the art of sex, perhaps. Constant re-invention; same instrument, different tunes.
A lover who's 'full of mystery'? That's the danger of stranger!
'just the dream filled kind' - apart from repeating 'dream' in the poem - remember if you don't have a dream, how can you have a dream come true?
Brian
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Don Gorgon at 20:29 on 25 November 2004
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I like this roovacrag, for me, the first couple of verses have an 'authoritative', 'demanding' tone to them and the last two verses outline what exactly your 'demands' are, with the last line encapsulating the lot in eight words! Lovely work roovacrag.
Thanks
Don
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The Walrus at 20:48 on 25 November 2004
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You gotta make up your mind babe, I mean 'take part of me, or whole.' or 'I want someone to stimulate/ not just the body but the mind'? We all want it all, but when you can't get all, you gotta take what you can get non? Otherwise, it's just wistfully waiting while Life just ticks on by. Err, right, I'm rambling, but my final thought is that this piece is cheering loudly for the sex and that is no bad thing.
Red
xxx
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roovacrag at 21:36 on 25 November 2004
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Brian.
I agree, stimulate the mind and the body stimulates yours.
Perfection.
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 21:40 on 25 November 2004
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Don.
We all look for the perfect lover,just only seems to happen in dreams.
Glad you liked the first two stanza.
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 21:43 on 25 November 2004
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Red
I know you would like me to go out there and find another man.
Not sure I would get one to fill my desires lol;-)).
Thanks babes.
xx Red mum
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.JPG) Zettel at 13:07 on 27 November 2004
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AliceJ
Frank, honest and direct. As ever, beautifully expressed.
I liked it. Until the last line, which I think ruins the poem. If a man wrote that line he would be pilloried as sexist, rightly.
Respectfully
Z
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Sorry AliceJ
'Pilloried' is OTT. But I think a guy would get some stick for the line.
Regards
Z
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Lawrenco at 22:56 on 28 November 2004
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Do they come in boil in the bag variety could be painful ! A good laugh.
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roovacrag at 21:57 on 02 December 2004
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Zettal.. I did say dream. All women dream of a perfect man on tap,just as a man looks at a woman the same way........IT'S NATURE.
XX aLICE
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roovacrag at 21:59 on 02 December 2004
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Lawrenco.......boil in the bag or better still bottle it.
Thanks for comments.
xx Alice
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