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The gods of WW

by joanie 

Posted: 18 November 2004
Word Count: 71
Summary: A VERY swift response to okkervil's comment on Roovacrag's 'Snow is Falling', when he said that the WW Gods act fast!!


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I offer my sacrifice.

A few words, written on
the spur of
the moment,

or pondered for days
on end.

Rhyming verses,
silent curses,
what's much worse is....

blank

verse

stanzas

toiled over,
re-worked,

waking in the night
to write another thought
however trivial.

I offer my sacrifice.

Oh, you gods of Writewords,
take me as I am,
poet inferior,
ego superior,
motives ulterior,

just take me!

I offer my sacrifice.








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Okkervil at 18:51 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
A swift response to that which is swiftly begotten! It's brilliant, incidently.
'Oh, you gods of Writewords,
take me as I am,
poet inferior,
ego superior,
motives ulterior,

just take me!'
- superb!

See! Poems don't need to be toiled over, this is hot off the press, and great (and inspired by something said by ME! Which of course is excellent)! Weeeeee for heathen gods. And for Joanie. And for snow.

Bye!

James

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ego superior
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Just noticed: Only two comments had been made on other people's stuff before this raised it's head. That is reaaaallly fast. You must have, like, flamey fingers by now or something.

joanie at 18:54 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
Thanks James. Excellent!! There's a lot to be said for spontaneity...... and a lot to be said for WW!! The ultimate panacea for a bloody hard day at work!

joanie

roovacrag at 19:56 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
Joan brilliant piece. Quickie poems tonight.

I love it.
Only takes a spark to light a fire that gets you going.

Well done.

xxxxxxxxxxx Alice

joanie at 20:11 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
Thanks Alice.

Joan

Don Gorgon at 21:46 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
joanie this is cool. It's nice when the words just flow out of your head onto the paper or pc, rather than 'pondering' and 'toiling' over them. I like the theme of 'offering your sacrifice' and the spacing you used with the 'blank verse stanzas' lines works well when I read it, seems 'sparse', if you know what I mean. I laughed at the 'waking in the night' lines, I think we'll all have done that before now and will do again no doubt. Sexy plea at the end too, 'just take me!', those three words we all long to hear! Haha! Nice works, again!

Thanks

Don



joanie at 20:31 on 21 November 2004  Report this post
Thanks Don!

joanie


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