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HOME AGAIN

by roovacrag 

Posted: 12 November 2004
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Black on Black
Black lead
lead pipe
pipe tobacco
tobacco plant
plant seed
seed grows
grows nation
nation returned
returned home
home is where the heart is.






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The Walrus at 21:30 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Clever one this, and quite a change in style. Reminds me, of the word association game. Like the way it starts with 'Black' and finishes 'home is where the heart is.'

Interesting, and in my opinion, successful departure.

The Walrus
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roovacrag at 21:49 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Red so busy writing a short story that I thought a quickie poem just to go along with.
Thanks for your comment.
xx Alice
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joanie at 22:45 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Alice, this is not like your usual 'thing'. I really like this! It is different; very clever.

joanie
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poemsgalore at 17:16 on 13 November 2004  Report this post
Yes I enjoyed this too Alice, got me wondering where it could go if you carried on - back to black maybe.
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roovacrag at 20:41 on 13 November 2004  Report this post
Joan it is not my usual thing. reading a poetry book that said choose a colour and use the word through.
I tried and didn't so you got this.

xx Alice
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roovacrag at 20:47 on 13 November 2004  Report this post
Poems I could have gone on and on.

Would have been good if we could all put one line into a poem and add onto it.
10 Poets all with one line.

then send it off to a publisher.;)
xx alice
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