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Stellar Red

by Dorothy P 

Posted: 12 November 2004
Word Count: 97


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The beautiful sloe-eyed girl
with warmth to spare,
she flicks a switch
even in the unaware.
Her smile could melt an iceberg,
her fire light the hardest heart,
she has qualities beyond mere mortals,
she is infused with Olympian properties
of grace and spirit.
Her insight is almost frightening
to behold,
her eyes live inside everyone,
her soul is old
yet eternal.
She is my goddess,
the woman I aspire to be,
wild, true and free.
In her face the promise
of all our tomorrows and today.
She is the ultimate definition of woman,
strong, brave, fearless.






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roovacrag at 15:55 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
A greek goddess none the less,thought the title was going to lead me to a red woman who drank stella.

Liked the line
She is my goddess,the woman I inspire to be,wild,true and free.
Then you finish with strong,brave and Fearless.
I see where the Red comes in.

Well done
xx Alice

Dorothy P at 16:15 on 19 February 2005  Report this post
This is about one of the most special women I have ever had the privelege not only to meet but also to befriend. Not a word is poetic license, every word is steeped in genuine admiration. We must all accolade those we love and respect.


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