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Autumn break - a Haiku

by joanie 

Posted: 08 November 2004
Word Count: 12
Summary: On gazing out while having a 'brew'!
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Seen through the tea's steam,
this misty autumn landscape
enhances my joy.






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Chem at 15:35 on 08 November 2004  Report this post
A lovely piece Joanie!
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poemsgalore at 18:20 on 08 November 2004  Report this post
Very restful and soothing, like the tea.
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joanie at 18:29 on 08 November 2004  Report this post
Em and Kathleen, thank you!

joanie
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Barlow at 17:00 on 09 November 2004  Report this post
I particularly like the first line Joanie. Very effective use of "ee" sound.
Barlow
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joanie at 17:42 on 09 November 2004  Report this post
Thank you for responding, Barlow - much appreciated!

joanie
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DerekH at 10:36 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Joanie, I like this very much. You paint a lovely picture of misted autumn colours, with a wonderfully relaxed feeling.

Derek.
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Account Closed at 11:09 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Lovely dreamy feel to this - I like the way the domestic simplicity of the tea merges with the wider landscape, linking humanity with nature.

LoL

A
xxx
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joanie at 16:10 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
Derek and Anne, thank you very much!

joanie
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