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Cosmic Winter

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 06 November 2004
Word Count: 32
Summary: in space no one can hear your rejection....
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Cosmic Winter


the winter rose burns
broken Maple slates tile the lawn
and the sun gutters,

a kiss forms in deep space
earth's black cheek turned
stardust blasting the moon.




John G.Hall(C)2004






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roovacrag at 20:31 on 06 November 2004  Report this post
John a beatiful well worded piece.
I enjoyed reading it.
xx Alice
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Chem at 15:38 on 08 November 2004  Report this post
John, I very much enjoyed this.
Especially - 'stardust blasting the moon'
Emma
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Celt at 12:23 on 10 November 2004  Report this post
Few words but full of meaning. Well done John.
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Okkervil at 10:06 on 12 November 2004  Report this post
I really liked this- it's so simple and well phrased, you don't think to question it, only to accept and enjoy what is said- you just sit, and savour, and think '...yes.'
Do y'know what I mean? You just roll it round in your head.

Bye!

James
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