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ENIGMA MAN
Posted: 29 October 2004
Word Count: 52
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You are a sight for sore eyes,
light up a room
wondrous gift
for stimulation.
Lifes sweet mystery
theatre of sensual asteem
will of a wisp of a witch
that sound of of a midas touch
Am I wrong?
or are you just
an enigma
all girls try to crack
and fail.
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 Brian Aird at 14:07 on 29 October 2004
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What must it be like to walk into a room and light it up! Those that can probably don't know how they do it themselves.
As you say so eloquently; a mystery, an enigma or a wondrous gift.
Brian
P.S. (Lifes >> Life's)
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 roovacrag at 16:40 on 29 October 2004
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Brian..thanks for this....it happens with men.
Some might enjoy..others don't.
Not easy being a man.
Glad I got a mans reaction to this.
Would you want a women chasing you?
For your body and sex, nothing more..no love?
Not easy on a man.
I think love should be love,not just sex.
xxxxxxxxx Alice
(You get extra kisses young man for honesty)
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Lawrenco at 10:27 on 31 October 2004
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Don`t we all have gifts isn`t this just an example of our "ki" energy?
A nicely constructive poem simple but puts the point across.
I think a man can be atracted to a woman for similar reasons.
ie. The second stanza
Lifes sweet mystery
theatre of sensual asteem
will of a wisp of a witch
that touch of a midas wish.
Possibly?
Patrick
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roovacrag at 14:20 on 31 October 2004
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Larenco.. feedback was perfect and I have changed it.
Many thanks my friend,
xx Alice
<Added>
Lawrenco.. will get my spelling in tact.
xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Souchong at 16:20 on 31 October 2004
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i really like the line 'you are a sight for sore eyes'. i know it is a common enough phrase, but in your poem it sits just right. nice one
souchong
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Lawrenco at 20:28 on 31 October 2004
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I`m really flatered that you endorsed some of my words,I was sad not to see the old stanza,perhaps two versions is a good idea!
Thanks for the interaction apprieciated!
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Don Gorgon at 23:57 on 31 October 2004
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Nice one roovacrag! It would be nice to think one had such an effect when one entered a room, but alas, with me it stops at the first line! Haha! Great work, I liked it before the edit, but didn't get time to comment, but the edited version is just as good (nice one Lawrenco!) My response to your question above, 'Would you want a women chasing you? For your body and sex, nothing more..no love?', hey, why not! Love is such a complicated ting!
thanks
Don
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