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AM I A LEMON?
Posted: 14 October 2004
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I sometimes feel like a Lemon
bitter,not sweet.
Yet my white flowers not much smell
just scented you see.
I am fed very well
as anyone can tell,
am I male?
or female please do tell.
With 30 Lemons or more
must be female,just amore
You squeeze me nice and soft
taste my juices which is not.
i am a lemon
I am tasty
I am me
sqeeze me
and see.
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 Sazmac at 16:54 on 14 October 2004
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loved this! specially the last stanza... wonderful.
how could anyone resist
lol
saz
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miffle at 17:39 on 14 October 2004
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fruity poem Alice and the lemon seems to have answered its own question at the end. Is a squeeze a hug? Nikki NB lemons might be bitter but they're a great tonic for the body :-)
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roovacrag at 20:29 on 14 October 2004
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Saz thanks for comment,just a fruity tale that needs a bit of zest,
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 20:31 on 14 October 2004
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Nikki if you saw how many lemons I really got on a tiny plant,all organic as well.
Thanks for comments.
xxx Alice
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 joanie at 21:02 on 14 October 2004
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Alice, I often say in my job, "I'm not going to stand here like a lemon waiting for you to stop talking!" I shan't say it again because I shall be thinking of being squeezed and being tasty after reading this! Better hadn't stand in front of everybody squirming deliciously! As Nikki said, fruity!
Joan
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miffle at 09:43 on 15 October 2004
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Alice, that sounds lovely! You must have green fingers to tend a lemon tree so successfully :-) Nikki x
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roovacrag at 16:51 on 15 October 2004
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Joan,standing there like a lemon is what I say as well. It is true,that lemon trees just there wait to be watered and fed,change pots every 3 years. That sinple. Hence standing there like a lemon.
xx Alice
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joanie at 18:09 on 15 October 2004
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Alice, I am just having a slice of lemon in my Friday evening drink! Shall I plant the seeds??
Joan
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The Walrus at 19:05 on 16 October 2004
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Very enjoyable piece Stan - got a mixture of everything in it - cheeky/flirty/tender.
Inspired stuff!
Red
xx
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roovacrag at 19:16 on 16 October 2004
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Red ...
many thanks,yes cheeky but my lemon tree which you have seen grew more lemons after your visit. Not sure if you sang to it, or talked it, or saw your beauty and decided to compete.
xx Alice
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Fearless at 20:14 on 18 October 2004
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Al
A zesty, fruity, come-hither concoction that I enjoyed. In the last line of the 3rd stanza, you may want to use the singular form for 'juice'; just a thought.
Write on Whisky Woman,
Woz
x
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