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FATE

by TheGodfather 

Posted: 27 September 2004
Word Count: 95


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Finished in the stall, I approach the sink.
Someone else has made a mess,
although I didn't know this on my approach.
The faucet handle holds some remaining soap suds
from a previous user who decided to disinfect.
Certain things ruin a day
and make a day.
I lean over the sudsy handle,
my pants touching so slightly against the counter.
Water, scrub, wring, rinse, flick.
Backing away, reaching for a paper towel, and
looking down with a frown and a wince,
I notice the waterline across my pleated khakis
begin to bleed and spread.






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roovacrag at 21:02 on 30 September 2004  Report this post
Goddy,you created such a good imagery here,as though I was standing in the same kitchen.

Well done.

xx Alice


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